These are the comments we collected about his work:
- Caleb added extra details (birds, real looking eggs in a nest, a tree with spring colours, the sun, clouds)
- he added colour to the title which made it stand out more
- we liked the way he added lines to make the bee look like it was zooming along
Well done, Caleb. It will be your turn to choose the winner next week!
The picher looks so reyealistik!
ReplyDeleteby Hannah A
Wow caleb thats awesome illistrating! I like your birds. By Reuben M
ReplyDeleteI like your mixed up storys because they are funy!By Reuben H
ReplyDeletethe cupcakes are nice and yumy!by Reuben H
ReplyDeleteNice birds caleb.By Nate
ReplyDeleteYOUR BEE IOOKS LIKE A HELICOPTER BY LEIGHTON
ReplyDeleteIt is asome!
ReplyDeletehannah
That looks coooooooooool as from Beng
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